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TIMESTAMPS:
0:00 Intro
0:50 Skip scenes the reader can imagine
2:11 Use strong verbs
3:33 Avoid 'ing' and 'to be' verbs
4:40 Describe, don't explain
5:31 If your story is boring, slow it down
6:46 Be specific
7:45 The push and pull of hope and despair
8:23 Character yearning
9:06 Character contradictions
10:08 Use the fewest words possible
11:17 Artistic incongruity
12:15 How can this be more interesting?

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