Did I fix my pacing issues?

Read the Airlock Bound web comic:

Tapas: https://tapas.io/series/AirlockBound...
Webtoon: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge...

Read Airlock Bound Novel: https://tapas.io/series/AirlockBound...

All my videos are released into the Public domain under the CC0 License: https://creativecommons.org/publicdom...

Read the original Airlock Bound comic I talked about in the video: https://imgur.com/gallery/IoCwxRH

The audio used in the Pokemon video was from a Vtuber called Snuffy by the way.
Music: Cuban Sandwich by Kevin Macleod