Explore five new types of bad dialogue and learn how to fix them. Examples from Star Wars, Breaking Bad, Batman, Seinfeld, The Room, Troll 2, and more!

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0:00 Intro
0:25 Good Dialogue
1:24 Good Dialogue Example (Breaking Bad)
2:32 Bad Dialogue
2:45 Forced Comedy (Bathos)
5:18 Info Dump Dialogue
7:43 Cartoonishly Evil Dialogue
10:56 Jarring Change of Subject
13:38 Rushed Emotional Reactions
16:57 Outro

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