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In this Film Courage video interview, Script Doctor, Writing Coach, and Author Daniel Calvisi discusses onthenose dialogue and its pitfalls. He defines onthenose dialogue as generic and lazy, overly explaining things that are already clear in the scene. While occasionally using onthenose dialogue might be necessary for orienting readers, he advises against making all characters sound the same or forcing Aaron Sorkinstyle dialogue for everyone.

DANIEL P. CALVISI is a Script Doctor, Writing Coach and the author of Story Maps: How to Write a GREAT Screenplay and Story Maps: TV DRAMA: The Structure of the OneHour Television Pilot. He is a former Story Analyst for major studios like Twentieth Century Fox, Miramax Films and New Line Cinema. He coaches writers, teaches webinars on writing for film and television and speaks at writing conferences. Many of his clients have worked with the top networks and studios in the industry, such as Netflix, HBO, Warner Brothers, Disney, Sony, ABC, Showtime, Apple TV+ and more. He holds a degree in Film and Television from New York University. He lives in Los Angeles.

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