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⏲ TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 I surveyed 367 readers
00:30 Too many characters
02:05 Meaningless action
06:07 Prologues
10:37 Dream sequences
13:17 Madeup words
16:44 Characters waking up
18:54 Confusing setups
21:55 Irrelevant characters/scenes
24:12 Slow pacing
27:28 Infodumping